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Post by deppscorpsebride on Oct 27, 2005 7:01:14 GMT -5
She wears a veil over her shoulders, a tattered wedding dress, thin, untamed hair, a long but beautiful mess. Big warm eyes, peering from behind blue pale skin, a slender nose, and slender arms, a body long and thin. Her beauty is undeniable, she's like a work of art, but the one thing that she lacks, is the beating of a heart. For although she is beautiful, from her toes to her head, sadly she resides, in the land of the dead. She waits in her wedding dress, she waits for her prince with pride, but her waiting is in vain, as are all the tears she's cried, for Emily hasn't noticed, that because she has died, no one shall ever want to marry, the beautiful Corpse Bride.
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Post by Emily on Oct 27, 2005 12:17:43 GMT -5
Aw that's sad.
Well written, but sad!
Makes me want to draw a picture ... I have an image of her in my head.
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Post by deppscorpsebride on Oct 27, 2005 15:07:01 GMT -5
Thanks. And you should draw a pic!
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Post by Empty Tears on Oct 28, 2005 15:04:22 GMT -5
Aww! Beautiful Claire! I love the rhyme scheme. Nice touch! XD Keep up the great work!
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Post by deppscorpsebride on Oct 31, 2005 19:46:49 GMT -5
Aw thanks Allie!
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Post by Emily on Nov 4, 2005 22:38:58 GMT -5
Well thanks to you, I have been drawing Emily quite alot!
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Post by deppscorpsebride on Nov 4, 2005 23:58:38 GMT -5
Me?? Aw Gen how sweet, I'm glad you've been drawing her more because of me I'd love to see one of your pics
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Post by Norrington's Phantomess on Nov 12, 2005 19:20:52 GMT -5
That was absolutely beautiful. It reminded me of Annabel Lee by Edgar Allen Poe.
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Post by Victorlicious on Nov 14, 2005 21:08:06 GMT -5
wow. that was so great.
write more! write more! haha
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