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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 17:48:31 GMT -5
^.^;;;
ME: *walks over to Carrion's corner* Hey
CARRION: Hello...
ME: Did you finish the fanfic?
CARRION: I did *holds out notebook*
ME: *takes it* And.......
CARRION: And what?
ME: well, that's what I'm asking you. Did you liek it? Did you hate it? Was there anything you think oughta be changed? I'm open to suggestions
CARRION: Well, on the beach at Xuxux--
ME: Not. That. That part was awesome, and I'm so happy with the way it came out. Anything but that
CARRION: I was actually going to say that your description of Shape's scream was almost chilling
ME: .......really?
SHAPE: *looks suspicious* What scream?
CARRION: *dark smile* Do you really want to know?
SHAPE: *edges away*
ME: But really?
CARRION: Hm?
ME: It was good?
CARRION: *shrugs* It was well-described
ME: Cool. Thank you
CARRION: I have one question
ME: Okay, shoot
CARRION: Why is there a piano in one of the rooms?
ME: .....because
CARRION: Because why?
ME: Because it's good character development
CARRION: It's good character development that my tower has a piano in one of its rooms?
ME: Just trust me, it will work out. And it will be a nice touch
CARRION: *rolls eyes*
ME: Anything else?
CARRION: Letheo is not as light-hearted as you're making him seem
ME: That was in one scene, and we're in a market in the afternoon. Why wouldn't we appear light-hearted?
CARRION: Because you're both my apprentices
ME: He is. I'm not really
CARRION: You're close enough
ME: I'm not even evil!
CARRION: Neither is Letheo
ME: Exactly. Which is why we appear light-hearted in that one scene. It's so obvious that Letheo is farther from evil than he would appear at first
CARRION: Especially in his transformation
ME: I'm working on a scene with that
CARRION: I see. I expect some gruesome imagery
ME: *small, casual salute* I live to impress *walks off*
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Post by Liz on Apr 9, 2006 17:51:13 GMT -5
Yay for good reviews! ;D
Aw, too bad. Anything else ya wanna sing?
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 17:52:31 GMT -5
Tara, I want to read your fanfic terribly. XP
Reminds me, are you gonna give me the link to your site any time soon?
I dunno if I wanna sing anything else....
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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 17:55:05 GMT -5
What a coincidence. Again. I want to write it terribly. I don't have a lot of time. Sorry to sound very lazy/vague, but it'll be done by the end of the summer at the latest! (probably.....or hopefully before then. still, you never know ^.^;;  Uh.....well, I'm having some difficulties with them. i mean, it's fine if you're posting and evrything, but just setting it up and making it look spiffy.....well, it isn't turning out too well. Rae tried to help, but we didn't get very far. Still, if you don't mind being the first member besides me and you don't mind having a boring default setting..... |
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 17:57:31 GMT -5
I don't mind that at all. ^^
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Post by Liz on Apr 9, 2006 17:57:47 GMT -5
Well, in the meantime...I'll sing.
*plays Into the West*
Lay down,
your sweet and weary head.
Night is falling.
You have come to journey’s end.
Sleep now,and dream
of the ones who came before.
They are calling,
from across the distant shore.
Why do you weep?
What are these tears upon your face?
Soon you will see.
All of your fears will pass away.
Safe in my arms,
you’re only sleeping.
What can you see,
on the horizon?
Why do the white gulls call?
Across the sea,
a pale moon rises.
The ships have come,
to carry you home.
And all will turn,
to silver glass.
A light on the water.
All souls pass.
Hope fades,
Into the world of night.
Through shadows falling,
Out of memory and time.
Don’t say,
We have come now to the end.
White shores are calling.
You and I will meet again.
And you’ll be here in my arms,
Just sleeping.
What can you see,
on the horizon?
Why do the white gulls call?
Across the sea,
a pale moon rises.
The ships have come,
to carry you home.
And all will turn,
to silver glass.
A light on the water.
Grey ships pass
Into the West.
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 17:59:13 GMT -5
*smiles and claps* Yay Liz! ^^
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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 18:03:59 GMT -5
Go Liz! *claps* Awesomeness I have two forums. One is mainly Abarat with a section for random discussion, book discussion, and other movie discussion, and the other forum is a writing forum. Poems, stories, fanfics, the works ^.^ They look very boring, and there's a lot of construction going on, but...well, yeah. here they are writerscorner.forumup.com/index.php?mforum=writerscorner&sid=2b6ed8d369126872767c54dff931988cWriting forum. Yup. welcometotheabarat.forumup.us/I dunno why that url is so much shorter. Anyhow, yeah. Abarat Forum. And a lot of the forum descriptions are very.....Taraesque. Ew, that's an ugly looking word |
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Post by Liz on Apr 9, 2006 18:04:55 GMT -5
^_^ Thanx, dudettes.
I gotta go. I'm watching America's Funniest Videos w/ mah family. Cy'all later! And you all better be here tomorrow night when I say goodbye. *leaves*
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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 18:06:10 GMT -5
I'll try to be here, Liz. Keep in mind that I have piano lessons, and I'll be gone from 5:30 until 7 or so. I'll see you sometime, though! *hugs* See ya later, dudette
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 18:06:49 GMT -5
Aw, see ya later, Lizzeh *mega-hugs*
I'll try as hard as I can to be here. I have play practice till 5:30, I think.
.... am I the only one who's still here? Hmm....
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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 18:31:03 GMT -5
Nope, I'm here. Just doin a few other things at the moment ^.^;;;
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 18:34:29 GMT -5
Aha ^^;
Alright, I'm sorta panicking because I think I deleted some confirmation email that has an activation code or something for me to be a registered user on your writing forum. XP
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Post by EbonyStar on Apr 9, 2006 18:35:18 GMT -5
Oh, really? I didn't even know there was an activation email sent out on that one ^.^;;;
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Post by Moonlight on Apr 9, 2006 18:36:38 GMT -5
I don't even know now. I'm confuzzled XP
It says I'm not registered.
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