It's Party Time!

[EbonyStar]

Here's that alliteration poem I wrote. it's titleless, like most of my poems nowadays

Glares toward the ground as a golden eye
Strung by a streamer of stars in the sky
Enclosed in a crystal corona of tears
Shed for the songs seeking sorrowful ears
Magical musics in mists of the Master
Fell through infinity, faster and faster
Reaching the radiant ruler of night
Balanced in beams of brilliance and light
Gleaming a glorious golden glow
Or swept with soot and dusty black snow
Stuck in the song of his bittersweet tune
Morbid and dark, yet majestic: The Moon

Can we say "Worst last line ever?"
I never went back and revised this one XP
I think the problem is it makes you so wrapped up in the words I chose and the alliteration that you don't really follow what the poem's saying, in the sense that you see all this pretty poetry and don't think of it as making sense. But there are full sentences and thoughts in there, somewhere

[Liz]

*sprinkles some confetti in the shape of the number 5000* Yay!

*laughs & shakes her head* Thanx, dudette. 'Preciate it.

My hands are kinda frozen and they hurt a LOT at the moment, so excuse my typoes more than usual if I make any ^.^

I'm gonna try to warm my hands up, cause they're so stiff it's really driving me insane

BJ: Ya know...I may be a skeleton, but my hands are pretty warm...*grabs Tara's hands & grins*

How?

I have no idea.

OMG Tara! SUPER-gorgeous poem! XP Beats mine into the ground, that's for sure.

[EbonyStar]

BJ: Ya know...I may be a skeleton, but my hands are pretty warm...*grabs Tara's hands & grins*

ME: *raises an eyebrow* And this is just you being a good citizen and helping out, right? *small smirk*

OMG Tara! SUPER-gorgeous poem! XP Beats mine into the ground, that's for sure.

*waves hand in so-so motion* Meh. I don't like it as much cause it's really only nice to listen to. It's not as clever or well-done as some of my other stuff. Y'know, it isn't deep and all that silly poetry stuff ^.^

[Liz]

ME: *raises an eyebrow* And this is just you being a good citizen and helping out, right? *small smirk*

BJ: Sure, let's go w/ that.

Y'know, it isn't deep and all that silly poetry stuff ^.^

It's NOT? Are we reading the same poem?

[EbonyStar]

BJ: Sure, let's go w/ that.

ME: Well.......now that my hands are a bit looser, wanna play the piano? Been a while since we played a duet, y'know
EMBER: *looks up from poetry* And whose fault is that?
ME: aw, shut it and read your poems. What're you reading, anyway?
EMBER: Nuthin. Just some of your older poems
ME: Oh. Tell me what you think of them *walks off to the piano*

It's NOT? Are we reading the same poem?

Is it the one about the moon? Then yeah. It wasn't supposed to be deep or anything. I seriously just wrote it to have something nice and flowing to say. It just sounded pretty, but didn't really mean anything. That was what I was going for, anyway, but then, I rarely end up where I aim in writing ^.^

Okay, where'd everybody go?

[Liz]

ME: Well.......now that my hands are a bit looser, wanna play the piano? Been a while since we played a duet, y'know

BJ: *grins widely* You read my mind, sugar. C'mon, let's go relive the good ol' days. *heads over to the piano*

EMBER: *looks up from poetry* And whose fault is that?

Heh...he sounds like me.

It wasn't supposed to be deep or anything. I seriously just wrote it to have something nice and flowing to say. It just sounded pretty, but didn't really mean anything.

*shrugs* Still sounded more poetic than anything I write.

Okay, where'd everybody go?

I dunno. I think Jem left to do her homework. Poor girl. *gives her a hug for when she comes back*

*giggles* Hey Tara....do you watch Danny Phantom at all?

[EbonyStar]

BJ: *grins widely* You read my mind, sugar. C'mon, let's go relive the good ol' days. *heads over to the piano*

ME: Sweet *sits down and scooches over. Starts playing some sort of melody for BJ to go along with*

Heh...he sounds like me.

EMBER: *small smile* I suppose, considering the number of times I've insulted you, that I deserve that
ME: Aaand there's another insult to add to the list
EMBER: That was minor. Hardly worth paying attention to

*shrugs* Still sounded more poetic than anything I write.

*shrugs* I like reading and writing. I love words in general. Languages, too. They're amazing. I wanna take up an independent study at my school witha few of my friends, and we'll teach ourselvves a language that they don't offer at my school. It'd be so much fun ^.^

*giggles* Hey Tara....do you watch Danny Phantom at all?

I used to. Rae said his hair was wicked hot. But Rae says that about a lot of guys. Why do you ask?

[Moonlight]

beetlebabe said:

I dunno. I think Jem left to do her homework. Poor girl. *gives her a hug for when she comes back*

Still doing it, actually. And watching Danny Phantom at the same time. ^^;
but thanks for the hug. I needed it. Homework makes me feel sad, and now I'm sadder than sad.
*hugs back*

*giggles* Hey Tara....do you watch Danny Phantom at all?

..... did you read my mind or something? I know you're not talking to me, but... deja vu.....

[Liz]

ME: Sweet *sits down and scooches over. Starts playing some sort of melody for BJ to go along with*

BJ: *immidiately picks up the melody & plays along w/ it*

EMBER: *small smile* I suppose, considering the number of times I've insulted you, that I deserve that

damn right

ME: Aaand there's another insult to add to the list
EMBER: That was minor. Hardly worth paying attention to

He's got a point..

Rae said his hair was wicked hot.

It is. ;D

But Rae says that about a lot of guys.

So do I. XP

Why do you ask?

Well, did you see the Fanning the Flames episode?

Still doing it, actually. And watching Danny Phantom at the same time. ^^;

.....whoa..

..... did you read my mind or something? I know you're not talking to me, but... deja vu....

Total weirdness....

[EbonyStar]

BJ: *immidiately picks up the melody & plays along w/ it*

ME: *starts going a little faster and using the pedal*

Well, did you see the Fanning the Flames episode?

I forget which one that is
Wait. Wait, hold on. I'm just guessing, but.....is that the one with Ember?

[Liz]

ME: *starts going a little faster and using the pedal*

BJ: *smirks & goes faster as well*

I'm just guessing, but.....is that the one with Ember?

*snickers* Yea.

[Moonlight]

beetlebabe said:

.....whoa..

Total weirdness....

I know....

Liz has ESP.

Now then... *works on homework*

[EbonyStar]

BJ: *smirks & goes faster as well*

ME: *starts playing higher and trills for a few seconds. continues playing melody. glances at Beej and smirks*
EMBER: Show off
ME: Go eat a snail *keeps playing*

*snickers* Yea.

EMBER: Wait, what?
ME: Not you
EMBER: Duh. What are we talking about?
ME: Something that doesn't concern you ;P

[Moonlight]

ebonystar said:

ME: Go eat a snail *keeps playing*

.... *holds up a snail and smirks at Ember*

[EbonyStar]

.... *holds up a snail and smirks at Ember*

EMBER: *raises eyebrows as if to say "Yeah, right* For your information, kid, I've eaten things far worse than snails